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Here comes the storm 2 by Tianibean

:iconladyokasu:
Since you request critique, here comes the critique:

You have a nice camera making it already easy, right?
Well, the art that makes the photo better is the focus...

The first thing, you are pointing t the sky, because there the clouds are for the rain, but the sky is blurred.

The focus of the camera is on the trees and the other black figures. This makes the contrast between the trees and sky nice, but it blurs.

Further, you might keep in mind to not capture too close figures, like the [car?], it's all blurry, and keeps more of the picture out.
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:icontianibean:
Tianibean Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thanks for the critique!!!
Yeah i have an okay camera. It is out of focus probably because it was really dark because of the clouds but it was bright because of the sky so my camera was having trouble focusing
I thought the reflection of the car was cool.
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:iconladyokasu:
LadyOkasu Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem^^
I have two camera's, both good on a different way^^
Dark shouldn't really be a problem through, it might just need some more time to focus...

So it was a car?
You can't really see it, plus the reflection is kinda invisible, since it's too blurry...
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:icontianibean:
Tianibean Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah that was probably it...

Yup it was parked out side so we could see if there was any damage from our little accident earlier that day.....
Aw i still think it looks neat:)
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:iconladyokasu:
LadyOkasu Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You should try to keep your camera further away, especially with reflections^^
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:icontianibean:
Tianibean Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
yeah it was like an experiment :XD:
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:iconladyokasu:
LadyOkasu Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay^^
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:icontianibean:
Tianibean Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:XD:yup
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LadyOkasu Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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